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RE: Heads up: The Athletic article on Ziaire Williams - Spiny_Norman - 11-24-2020

(11-24-2020, 12:45 PM)Hank 91 Wrote:  I stumbled across this article today and came here to make sure it had been posted. One of the best Stanford basketball articles I've read in quite a while. As for his one-and-done status, it doesn't bother me. Sure, I miss the days when we could root for a player for four seasons, but I can blame neither the player who wants to make money in the NBA nor the program that wants to nurture him for a year. 

One other note -- any article that's about someone named Williams and begins with a red wheelbarrow, is okay by me!

So much depends
On Ziare Williams
Glazed with sweat
Driving to the hoop


RE: Heads up: The Athletic article on Ziaire Williams - JJJ - 11-24-2020

(11-24-2020, 05:49 PM)Spiny_Norman Wrote:  
(11-24-2020, 12:45 PM)Hank 91 Wrote:  I stumbled across this article today and came here to make sure it had been posted. One of the best Stanford basketball articles I've read in quite a while. As for his one-and-done status, it doesn't bother me. Sure, I miss the days when we could root for a player for four seasons, but I can blame neither the player who wants to make money in the NBA nor the program that wants to nurture him for a year. 

One other note -- any article that's about someone named Williams and begins with a red wheelbarrow, is okay by me!

So much depends
On Ziare Williams
Glazed with sweat
Driving to the hoop
Nice, but for true haiku, more like:

So much depends on 
Z-Will all glazed in sweat
Driving to the hoop

(There’s your 5-7-5 syllables.)
:)


RE: Heads up: The Athletic article on Ziaire Williams - Hank 91 - 11-25-2020

The English teacher in me demands that I point out we're not looking for a haiku. Here's the original...

so much depends
on

a red wheel
barrow

glazed with rain
water

beside the white
chickens


Now here's a reworking:

so much depends
on

a five-star
freshman

showered with true
accolades

beside his talented
teammates


RE: Heads up: The Athletic article on Ziaire Williams - JJJ - 11-25-2020

(11-25-2020, 12:49 PM)Hank 91 Wrote:  The English teacher in me demands that I point out we're not looking for a haiku. Here's the original...

so much depends
on

a red wheel
barrow

glazed with rain
water

beside the white
chickens


Now here's a reworking:

so much depends
on

a five-star
freshman

showered with true
accolades

beside his talented
teammates
Thanks for the lesson, Mr. Hank91. :)


RE: Heads up: The Athletic article on Ziaire Williams - Spiny_Norman - 11-25-2020

(11-25-2020, 12:49 PM)Hank 91 Wrote:  The English teacher in me demands that I point out we're not looking for a haiku. Here's the original...

so much depends
on

a red wheel
barrow

glazed with rain
water

beside the white
chickens


Now here's a reworking:

so much depends
on

a five-star
freshman

showered with true
accolades

beside his talented
teammates

This Is Just To Say - well done, Hank. And a belated happy birthday to you!