04-03-2014, 07:43 PM
(04-03-2014, 10:32 AM)Mick link Wrote:[quote author=82 Card link=topic=9773.msg87065#msg87065 date=1396482639]
[quote author=82lsju link=topic=9773.msg87030#msg87030 date=1396454062]
below is a link to his essay.
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http://nypost.com/2014/04/02/this-is-the...l-8-ivies/
I tried reading the essay. He lost me right away with "opting to select". He repeatedly uses three words when 1 would would be better. I don't think I could have gotten into Penn in 1975 with that essay.
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And sometimes one word would be better than two.... :P
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Hmmm. Not sure when I started stuttering. Must have had a stroke.
