10-04-2021, 02:59 PM
Nice job as always, Troy. One nit, that's been mentioned elsewhere: you refer to the penalty at the end of regulation as pass interference. It was actually defensive holding, which is a pretty big difference.
If there's one thing people have learned in Berkeley, it's that you can't put "Cal football" and "Rose Bowl" in the same sentence. The words just don't fit. You'd be better off linking "covered wagons" with "Mars travel." (Bruce Jenkins, Cal '70, SF Chronicle, Nov. 11, 2017)