Stanford Football Marketing - It's Crickets...

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03-07-2023, 05:30 PM

I'm not seeing anything wrong except that "we" is closer than "you" to the clause "As a valued supporter...". That makes it sound like "we" are the valued supporter rather than "you". Would MS Word catch that, or did I miss something more blatant?

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CompSci87

03-07-2023, 05:30 PM

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Stanford Football Marketing - It's Crickets... - by CardinalSagehen - 03-06-2023, 03:56 PM

RE: Stanford Football Marketing - It's Crickets... - by oldalum - 03-07-2023, 12:43 PM

RE: Stanford Football Marketing - It's Crickets... - by TrumpCard - 03-07-2023, 05:08 PM

RE: Stanford Football Marketing - It's Crickets... - by CardinalSagehen - 03-07-2023, 01:12 PM

RE: Stanford Football Marketing - It's Crickets... - by martyup - 03-07-2023, 01:16 PM

RE: Stanford Football Marketing - It's Crickets... - by marchballer - 03-07-2023, 01:36 PM

RE: Stanford Football Marketing - It's Crickets... - by stanfordstro - 03-07-2023, 03:56 PM

RE: Stanford Football Marketing - It's Crickets... - by Spiny_Norman - 03-07-2023, 03:11 PM

RE: Stanford Football Marketing - It's Crickets... - by BobK - 03-07-2023, 03:31 PM

RE: Stanford Football Marketing - It's Crickets... - by pefloresjr - 03-07-2023, 04:37 PM

RE: Stanford Football Marketing - It's Crickets... - by SamuelMcF - 03-07-2023, 04:52 PM

RE: Stanford Football Marketing - It's Crickets... - by BobK - 03-07-2023, 05:25 PM

RE: Stanford Football Marketing - It's Crickets... - by CompSci87 - 03-07-2023, 05:30 PM

RE: Stanford Football Marketing - It's Crickets... - by TrumpCard - 03-07-2023, 07:13 PM

RE: Stanford Football Marketing - It's Crickets... - by PVTree - 03-07-2023, 06:34 PM

RE: Stanford Football Marketing - It's Crickets... - by SamuelMcF - 03-07-2023, 06:42 PM

RE: Stanford Football Marketing - It's Crickets... - by BobK - 03-07-2023, 07:20 PM

RE: Stanford Football Marketing - It's Crickets... - by BostonCard - 03-07-2023, 09:11 PM

RE: Stanford Football Marketing - It's Crickets... - by cardcrimson - 03-07-2023, 09:46 PM

RE: Stanford Football Marketing - It's Crickets... - by oldalum - 03-07-2023, 10:59 PM

RE: Stanford Football Marketing - It's Crickets... - by CompSci87 - 03-08-2023, 11:49 AM

RE: Stanford Football Marketing - It's Crickets... - by 76lsjumb - 03-08-2023, 12:25 PM

RE: Stanford Football Marketing - It's Crickets... - by CompSci87 - 03-08-2023, 03:33 PM

RE: Stanford Football Marketing - It's Crickets... - by 76lsjumb - 03-08-2023, 03:45 PM

RE: Stanford Football Marketing - It's Crickets... - by oldalum - 03-08-2023, 08:49 PM

RE: Stanford Football Marketing - It's Crickets... - by CompSci87 - 03-08-2023, 10:18 PM

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