02-21-2022, 09:25 PM
Interesting read, Genuine Realist. I admit that five years ago I would have hated your fictional world, but now I'm intrigued.
If there's one thing people have learned in Berkeley, it's that you can't put "Cal football" and "Rose Bowl" in the same sentence. The words just don't fit. You'd be better off linking "covered wagons" with "Mars travel." (Bruce Jenkins, Cal '70, SF Chronicle, Nov. 11, 2017)